I am Beautiful (Definition of Beautiful Challenge)

by Blusparrow

I am a nerd, glasses, braces, and all. I had my As, but when it came to the boys, I failed. I did have friends though, the nerd group as we were called. So I was surprised when one day,

“Hi”, said this very handsome man.
I looked at him and I couldn’t talk, I am not very good at this.
“It’s ok you don’t have to talk, just listen. I have had my eye on you for a long time. You seemed so into your books so I just thought this was the only way. I like you a lot and I think you beautiful. You’re not like the other girls, you’re pure and you don’t so much care about your looks. So, will you go out with me?”
I blushed, again I couldn’t speak right away, it took me a long time until I managed to say, “Your, you’re a very nice man… I am very shocked that you think I am beautiful, no one has ever said that to me before….Yes, I will.”
“You know beauty isn’t always skin deep,” We said in a very sweet voice as he fixed his eyes on me, “Can I walk you to class?” He held me hand.
I melted, but finally got a nod in.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. I am Beautiful (Definition of Beautiful Challenge)

    I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!'s Buddy Icon I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    whoooo,that was cute.

  2. I am Beautiful (Definition of Beautiful Challenge)

    yoITSme's Buddy Icon yoITSme

    Posted 8 months ago

    ughhhh if i read one more ficlet about some loser getting a gorgeouse guy i will burst!!!!! please be original!!

  3. I am Beautiful (Definition of Beautiful Challenge)

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 8 months ago

    =(, that was the first thing that came to mind when I thought beautiful. I really think beautiful was more on the inside, sorry.

  4. I am Beautiful (Definition of Beautiful Challenge)

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 8 months ago

    If you didn’t want to read it then why read it and comment like that, that was mean..sorry but it was…

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    Posted 8 months ago

    Yeah yoITSme, that was very mean. If your critizising fine, but not being just plain rude. I liked your story Blu. And I agree, beauty is on the inside.
    LoA

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    White Hat's Buddy Icon White Hat

    Posted 8 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Yol’s complaint was valid, however rude and poorly spelled, though, but ILFIAWB ’s comment is also valid.

    Cute. Also unoriginal, unrealistic and from a very strange perspective.

    “Nerdiness” has nothing to do with how one looks. The Steve Urkel-esque and general TV picture of young adult social clique, subculture, and stereotype ideas really bears very little resemblance to reality.

    I like the idea behind this ficlet, but it could have used some more care in its execution.

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    Alexis DeHearts' Buddy Icon Alexis DeHearts

    Posted 8 months ago

    I agree with White Hat. Cute, but it doesn’t seem like it’s very well thought out.

  8. I am Beautiful (Definition of Beautiful Challenge)

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 8 months ago

    I’m not going to comment back and try to defend my story, it’s not worth it, it just arises more people against me. Discrediting me, telling me I didn’t even work very hard on it. wow you guys must be the nice side of this ficlets family.

  9. I am Beautiful (Definition of Beautiful Challenge)

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    Posted 8 months ago

    Contrary to the common opinion, I found this piece very nice. Some have made comments on how “unrealistic” this story is, but they do not realize that there are people out there that actually value interior beauty.

    Well done, Blu.

  10. I am Beautiful (Definition of Beautiful Challenge)

    Freedom :]'s Buddy Icon Freedom :]

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i luv it & no one betta not be talking bout my friend!

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