Kidnapped dream

by Blair

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It’s basically kidnapping.
What they did to me and everyone by my side.
Before we knew it, we were raised with religion and shoved to a private school that takes any individuality as a crime.
Forced to be only in a controlled enviorment and looked down upon when voices reached what they called
“disrespectful, and not meant for inside.”
But complaining wouldn’t do much to brain washed adults that think that kids are fun little pets to feed and train.
One more year till I’m out, but being out doesn’t mean much if all these years I had been shown only one world that lied inside the stone cold hallways. If i got out would I know how to behave, and would i have a mind of my own.
Or had this lifestyle taken not only my indivuduality but my freedom too?
So i ask myself, is this place is considered prison and I am a mere child kidnapped against my will.

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Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. Kidnapped dream

    White Hat's Buddy Icon White Hat

    Posted 8 months ago

    2.0 out of 5 stars

    Brainwashed. One word.
    Capitalization on “i” in the last sentence.
    Overall, it’s a bit heavy-handed, but it does get the point across.

  2. Kidnapped dream

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 8 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    A bit dramatic, but I’m assuming that’s what you were going for. And didn’t quite follow your point in the last sentence, perhaps due to a typo or something?
    LoA

  3. Kidnapped dream

    butterflygirl6106's Buddy Icon butterflygirl6106

    Posted 8 months ago

    Message received and I guess it depends on whether or not It’s a prison to you but to your parents a way to help you accomplish positive goals in your life. Life is not fair nor is the way things are in schools now days.
    A controlled enviorment govern by rules is also parents way of saying RESPONSIBILITY LESSON .

  4. Kidnapped dream

    LovingYourHeartbreak♥'s Buddy Icon LovingYourHeartbreak♥

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    AHHH TOTALLLYYY !!!! omgeee lauren ily hi you are sooo deep and like perspectivey…

  5. Kidnapped dream

    snakepandafox<3's Buddy Icon snakepandafox<3

    Posted 7 months ago

    haha that’s how i kinda feel seriously there is no trace of expressing urself in our skool at all dude we hav 2 even wear a ceritin color of shoes!!!

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