Thinking It Over

by The Broken Mirror

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Later that night, I was contemplating all that had happened to me that day. I wondered if he really liked me, or if it was just some sick joke.
My phone rang, looking at the caller id, I answered it with, you talked to him didn’t you?
He replied with a laugh on the verge of his lips, I could hear it through the phone. I’m so happy for you, he said, with just a tad bit of sarcasm. You know, he really likes you, Max finished off with.
_He told me something, I think maybe you should know about . . . _

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Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. Thinking It Over

    Brebelles' Buddy Icon Brebelles

    Posted 8 months ago

    yeah…not the best sequel. Sorry. If you want to do dialoge with the phone, do “quotes”.

  2. Thinking It Over

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 7 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    It was ok!! Quotes might be nice though…
    I like this way that it’s going, UNLESS it breaks up Jo and Jake!!!! then we’d start an angry mob… J/k!!

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