Windows

by Living In Wonder Land ♠

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Darkness over-shadowed her petite 5’4 frame, but through the darkness she could see the outline of an icy blue window. Windows are like passages to other worlds. Worlds that go beyond the imagination confined in the depth of the windows beholder. The small girl rose from underneath the satin sheets and thrust herself into the what seemed like endless darkness as she manuvered herself toward the window. Her eyes drifted to the scene behind the glossy window pane. Rain drops fillied with glows of moonlight fell in scattered bunches everywhere purging the world below it. The moon hung effortlessly and the stars shone brightly with pride. Branches blew in the winds current as the tree trunks tried there best to hold their ground. The small girl pulled away from the window unwillingly and proceeded back to her bed and drowned herself in the warmth of the sheets the sight of that unknown world replaying in her mind.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Windows

    Blood Red Sky's Buddy Icon Blood Red Sky

    Posted 7 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    intersting

  2. Windows

    heartbeats echocho's Buddy Icon heartbeats echocho

    Posted 7 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    hmmm…yes very interesting. love the way you described it. reminds me of times i have spent staring out of windows…. : ) good times lol
    LoA

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    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like the variation of in the eye of the beholder with in the window of the beholder, and the connection between the saying, the eyes are the window to the soul and what you said, the window being a passage to another world. Dreamy, not like Barbies boyfriend Ken, but like surreal, etheral, and vivid.

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    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I think this sentence—Rain drops fillied with glows of moonlight fell in scattered bunches everywhere purging the world below it. would read better if you added a few commas and deleted the word glows. I don’t think glows is needed because moonlight glows by itself, moonlight says it all. See if this reads better, Rain drops, fillied with moonlight, fell in scattered bunches everywhere, purging the world below it.

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