1/28/08;; "Your Gaurdian Angel"

by RunningWithScissors

When I see your smile.. tears run down my face..
I shook my head and loosened my ponytail. As I reached towards my melting snack I stopped suddenly- and then I remembered..
I will never let you fall, I’ll stand up with you forever..
We were waddling in a cold courtyard wrapped around each other. Just like how we used to be.
I was smiling hugely and he was luaghing. I sillily pushed him against the wall. He grinned and looked down at me with wide, frosty blue eyes.
I’ll be there for you through it all..
His head bent towards mine and I pursed my lips, fighting the urge to giggle.
“I love you,” I whispered just as he was millimeters away.
He cracked up at that. I narrowed my eyes, confused.
I looked deep into his eyes and realized he was high. Wasted high.
Seasons are changing and waves are crashing
The nightmare skipped and I was away from him, in the back of a car. I was crying, glitter and mascara clumps and snot.
And then I woke up.
Even if savin you sends me to heaven..

Comments

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  1. 1/28/08;; "Your Gaurdian Angel"

    White Hat's Buddy Icon White Hat

    Posted 8 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Like it.
    But why do your ellipses only have two dots?

  2. 1/28/08;; "Your Gaurdian Angel"

    RunningWithScissors' Buddy Icon RunningWithScissors

    Posted 8 months ago

    i remembered a nightmare. :]
    ^^

  3. 1/28/08;; "Your Gaurdian Angel"

    Sturek's Buddy Icon Sturek

    Posted 8 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I like it a lot. That image of the girl crying in the back of the car is really, really good.

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