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by emma jo_234

what doesn’t matter
what doesn’t feel

who would stand it?
who won’t heal?

cruel and cold
simple and plain

and no one could fathom
what she could gain.

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    I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!'s Buddy Icon I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very good.

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    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    great flow.

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    The rhythm of this is really good.

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    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    this was awesome, nice job

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    SocccerISmyLIFE's Buddy Icon SocccerISmyLIFE

    Posted 7 months ago

    beautiful!

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    heartbeats echocho's Buddy Icon heartbeats echocho

    Posted 7 months ago

    i agree with all of the above (urgh! so much for speaking my mind…lol.) awesome stuff, keep it up….
    LoA

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