Fun, Spy-movie-esque.
Why is the first sentence in present tense?
Need an apostrophe for the possessive at the beginning of the fourth mini-paragraph [minigraph?].
Can’t wait to see more.

It’s in present tense because I am a graphic designer not an author. LOL

Hey, “minigraph” is a cool word. Since it’s called “ficlets” they should create their own terminology too. Nice.

I’ll try to fix present tense, I suck at this kind of stuff though.

I liked the first sentence in present tense. The story is told not in flowery prose but in straighforward statements of fact, the language an accountant. And a spy movie idea starring an accountant! That’s awesome. Who would have thought of that?
LoA

Pretty coo! You have a knack for opening scenes that draw readers in right away with a mystery.

Remember that it was IRS people who brought down Al Capone…