Diamond Rake

by Will Hindmarch

“We’ve lied to millions of people,” Biers said, elbow-deep in loops of purple guts.

“Billions, man,” said Kimberley. “Both planets.”

“And how many, what, trillions of dollars?” Biers stepped down on one arc of jagged ribs and pushed out on the other like he was breaking down a cardboard box. Sounded like bubble wrap going off. In the gristle, clinging to both halves of the rib cages, were dozens of angular diamonds, pink with sunlight and blood. A half-dozen alien eyes stared at him from the thing’s severed birdlike head.

“Why are we talking about this?” Kimberley scratched out diamonds with her rake.

“How many satellites can probably see us right now? It’s like one of those, you know — an open secret. Does anyone actually not know how these things are made anymore?”

Kimberly shook a few stuck diamonds out of her rake. “There’s knowing and there’s knowing, right? People want to want, not to know.”

Biers snorted. He meant, “True, that.”

“Probably shouldn’t be talking about this.” Kimberly pointed up.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Diamond Rake

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Bizarre and wonderful and nearly alogorical, which I have likely misspelled. Love the outrageous premise hinted at in the midst of a serious conversation. Great little ficlet, entertaining and even thought provoking.
    LoA

  2. Diamond Rake

    White Hat's Buddy Icon White Hat

    Posted 7 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Spy satellites with laser microphones?
    Trippy.

  3. Diamond Rake

    Eckhouse's Buddy Icon Eckhouse

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Awesome. Makes me sympathetic to the plight of the bird-like thingies.

  4. Diamond Rake

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    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Your opening line promises an awesome ride, and the rest of the story delivered. Anything with purple guts and gristle instantly wins.

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