On The Couch

by Howie Amourscow

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The world begins to rumble from your ass to your teeth and the Hand Of God covers your chest, holds you down, viciously pushes you back into the launch couch. His Terrible Roar fills your skull.

Gregor poured fire up his nose. He tried to cough out the cheap scotch and couldn’t breathe with the weight on his chest. Tears flowed into his ears. He was dimly aware of a yowling sound and suddenly realized Matti was shrieking like a kid on a rickety 20th century wooden rollercoaster; he’d managed to raise his hands up and was holding them out against the gees.

“We’re goin’ up, Gregor!” he shrieked through his teeth, lips pulled back in a grotesque, clownish parody of a face. Gregor thought he was going to vomit and only thinking of the mess kept his teeth shut like a sluice gate. He closed his eyes and remembered hating this sixteen years ago.

And then God let go. The thunder stopped.

Gregor rolled his eyes to the window. A brown-blue line, eggshell thick, separated the world from the sky.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. On The Couch

    Geheim Sir Ayita's Buddy Icon Geheim Sir Ayita

    Posted 5 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow no idea what to make of that but i the quirky similies (shrieking like a kid on a rickety 20th century wooden rollercoaster) and misplaced commons (Tears flowed into his ears) its profoundly fresh

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    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    A toothy ass quake - only the might of God could instill such shakes. lol The end left me wrinkle faced like I was figuring a riddle, but I stopped trying and accepted the scene for what it is - quite poetic and cool. And before I read this I was spelling sluice as sluece, so thanks for inderectly teaching me how to spell.

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    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    disregard my disregard for the rules of the crossout. Not intended.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Awesome description of launch and two distinctly different reactions to it. I’m with Matti. Wheeeeee!
    LoA

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