Date ficlet

by Blood Red Sky

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“I was wondering if you would like to go to dinner and a movie with me?” Jonothan asked.
“Seriously?” Christie replied.
“Yeah.”
“Umm… okay,” Christie giggled.
“Cool pick you up at 6:30 on Friday, see ya then.”
“Okay,” she said turning to her friends “Did he just ask me out?”
Her friends giggled.
“Oh well it can’t hurt to try”
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“Here we are Dave and Busters” Jonothan said as he pulled into the parking lot. “And right after dinner we can go see whatever movie you want.”
“Mm” was Christie’s reply
The two walked into the restuarant and got seated immediatly. “Go ahead and order whatever you want”
“Kay” she said looking uncomfortable.
After dinner they decide to go play arcade games.
“Here is a game pass play whatever you want”
“Okay” she said.

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Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. Date ficlet

    Blood Red Sky's Buddy Icon Blood Red Sky

    Posted 5 months ago

    based on a dream

  2. Date ficlet

    kells' Buddy Icon kells

    Posted 5 months ago

    Hey, this looks like a cute start, but I have to say, it felt kind of rushed. My suggestion might be to break it up into two ficlets, so you could have more space to develop the ‘before’ and ‘results’ half.

  3. Date ficlet

    Blood Red Sky's Buddy Icon Blood Red Sky

    Posted 5 months ago

    i’m going to take you’re advice thankies

  4. Date ficlet

    Blood Red Sky's Buddy Icon Blood Red Sky

    Posted 5 months ago

    i’m going to take you’re advice thankies

  5. Date ficlet

    Blood Red Sky's Buddy Icon Blood Red Sky

    Posted 5 months ago

    i’m gonna mark it as a draft

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    lost_at_sea's Buddy Icon lost_at_sea

    Posted 5 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree with Kells. The ficlet did feel kind of rushed, and I think you could have added a bit more detail. By the way, “immedeatly” should be spelled as “immediately”. But I do think that this story could go somewhere. :)

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