lovesick2

by Dr. Lew

“Staring at Mark again?” I glare at Emmett and cling my books closer to my chest. “You’re just jealous,” I pout, not letting him get to me. I refuse to let him ruin my good hair day… well… not good for me, but Marks hair is hotter than it usually is so that means it’s a good hair day. emmett just sighs and turn away to talk to Lauren about some math assignment due today. They finally snap me out of it when Lauren’s shrill voice cuts through my thoughts. “NO! For the love of god, I will not let you copy!” Emmett looks like a five-year-old being rejected candy when his face suddenly lights up and he turns to me smiling a smile almost worthy of Mark. He knows that i will give the paper to him if he pesters me ehoughg and so do I, so I just hand it over to him and scold him for not doing his homework.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. lovesick2

    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    lol I like the whole good hair day thing when it was his hair. lol that was funny!!!

  2. lovesick2

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 7 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    hahaha. The copying thing sounds exactly like me. If one of my friends bothers me sufficiently about it, I always give in in the end.
    Paragraphing and a bit more detail would have made the story more readable.

Want to comment on this ficlet? You need to sign in!