Controversy

by One Time, One Chance

“Are you ready?” I asked him.

“Yeah.”

“Then close your eyes..”

“AUTUMN!” Kait yelled from behind me.

I closed my own eyes and breathed a sigh of infuriation. “Yeah?”

“You comin’?”

“I’ll be there in a sec, I’m kind of doing something!”

“But I need to talk to you.” she whined.

Warren had opened his eyes and was glaring at Kait.

“Tomorrow, I promise.” I turned to him and said.

He looked a little disappointed, but said okay and kissed me goodbye.

“Why haven’t you been coming home with me lately?” she asked as we were walking to my house.

“I’ve been walking with Warren.”

Silence.

“What, are you mad at me?”

“I’m losing my best friend over some guy!”

“Well..” I had to think fast, “I think I’m going to break up with him anyway.”

OMG . No you’re not!

“Oh.. seriously?”

“Yeah,” I was beginning to stumble my words, “you mean more to me.”

“Well.. but what would you think if I told you that I liked him?”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Controversy

    yoITSme's Buddy Icon yoITSme

    Posted 8 months ago

    oh this is good…but i feel bad for kait

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    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted 8 months ago

    oh, well then, that sux for her.

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    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wowsers…did not expect that.
    nice twist.

    by the way, “enfuriation” should be spelled as “infuriation”, I believe.

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    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Sequel !

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    NightMaiden's Buddy Icon NightMaiden

    Posted 7 months ago

    aaaaahh
    a love triangle
    zis is getting heated up

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    Posted 6 months ago

    that sucks for Autumn..

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    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    OMG ! dude, that sounds just like whats happening with me and my bff right now!! ahh!! this is sooo goooodddddddddddddddd

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