Brianna

by RJ

Brianna Nichole Smith, Ohhh, what should I tell you about her! Well, she was nice . She was 15 years old and after thirteen tries of trying to get it she,(by some Miricale) got her temps. She had to try thirteen times because she would eitheir crash or pass out because she was nervous.
One day she was driving home from soccer and had her sister in the back seat. Her sister decided un-buckle her seat belt and hug on her sister, from behind. That caused her sister to crash into a ditch and flip over into a tree. Her sister managed to get out and go for help.
Later, Mickey, came back with help, but it was too late. Brianna had been turned to ash because the car had caught flames and exploded.

To be continued.......

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. Brianna

    Kevin Lawver's Buddy Icon Kevin Lawver

    Posted 8 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice try, smart guy.

  2. Brianna

    Kevin Lawver's Buddy Icon Kevin Lawver

    Posted 8 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Sorry, my previous comment was posted when the story was just a series of d’s. This has potential!

  3. Brianna

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 8 months ago

    It’s tragic… but it still needs something…

  4. Brianna

    Brandiee;*<3's Buddy Icon Brandiee;*<3

    Posted 8 months ago

    ahahahahah you make me laugh !

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