Brianna

by RJ

Brianna Nichole Smith, Ohhh, what should I tell you about her! Well, she was nice . She was 15 years old and after thirteen tries of trying to get it she,(by some Miricale) got her temps. She had to try thirteen times because she would eitheir crash or pass out because she was nervous.
One day she was driving home from soccer and had her sister in the back seat. Her sister decided un-buckle her seat belt and hug her sister, from behind. That caused her sister to crash into a ditch and flip over into a tree. Her sister managed to get out and go for help.
Later, Mickey, came back with help, but it was too late. Brianna had been turned ash because the car had caught flames and exploded.

To be continued.......

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 1.0 stars out of 5

  1. Brianna

    White Hat's Buddy Icon White Hat

    Posted 7 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    This reads like The Very Hungry Caterpillar. Except, y’know, darker and less literary.

  2. Brianna

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 7 months ago

    lol good story rj

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