Fifteen Ways to Leave Mexico

by Higgs

When I finally opened my eyes, the glare of the sun made me wince. Pulling myself up so I could lean against the cool adobe wall behind me, I felt sharp pain shoot up my leg where the knife had cut.

“Where the hell am I,” I thought, “and who was driving that ugly-ass Impala?”

I stood up, and nearly cut myself on shattered glass next to me.

“Bastard made me drop my beer.”

I allowed myself a cruel smile, then walked down a dusty road that led to a small building, and a pickup truck idling outside. Maybe there’s a phone there.

As I approached the door, Clarissa walk out. She was lovely as always, over-dressed for wherever the hell we were, and pointing a revolver at my head.

“Well hello, Robert,” she said, holding the gun perfectly steady, “I was hoping I might have a chance to screw you over for leaving me in that rat hole bar in Seville.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. Fifteen Ways to Leave Mexico

    White Hat's Buddy Icon White Hat

    Posted 9 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Can a pain be lacerating? I’m not clear on that.
    Good characterization, though. Reminds me a bit of Burn Notice.

  2. Fifteen Ways to Leave Mexico

    kraken's Buddy Icon kraken

    Posted 9 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Works for me. Seems a little shallow. Wanted to take it to first person, so I did. Changes the tone, somewhat.

Want to comment on this ficlet? You need to sign in!