Loss

by beautyfulmind

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I opened my door,
I let you come through,
I tried and i tried,
But still lost to you,

So i sit here alone,
Waiting for the next stage,
Where i lose all my sense,
Then feel hopeless, ashamed.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Loss

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i really like this – might be a bit short, but it still gets the feeling through=]

  2. Loss

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 6 months ago

    cool poem of loss.
    LoA

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