What a difference an 'e' makes.

by Kimball Kinnison

He relaxed into the chair, sinking into the timeworn padding, the cushions forming into their familiar shape. He swirled the amber liquid in the crystal tumbler cradled in his careworn hands. This was the one indulgence that he allowed himself. A small tot before bed. In the quiet time between lights out and the first cries of the homesick.

He was a scotch man. The peaty overtones of the Islay malts and the salty undertones of a Speyside were somehow directly connected to the parts of his brain which allowed him to relax. Nothing was quite like the first sip of Tormore, or the long lasting euphoria following a good Ardbeg.

He glanced at his dressing table, at the decanter of liquid gold oblivion and the companion tumbler to the one on which his consternation was currently focussed. He had been the victim of pranks before now. Teenage hijinks which he could always dismiss as harmless. This however was beyond the pale. Someone had taken his comfort, his tranquility, and replaced it with whiskey!

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  1. What a difference an 'e' makes.

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Hilarious, serious, somber tone throughout and then a great ending. You can almost taste the snootiness. Nice line about the time between lights out and the cries of the homesick.
    LoA

  2. What a difference an 'e' makes.

    White Hat's Buddy Icon White Hat

    Posted 6 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    THX says it again.

    ( 0.o This is my 501st comment! )

  3. What a difference an 'e' makes.

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 6 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    the first paragraph felt a bit choppy to me, but still – i liked it! very funny yet serious, as THX said, but enjoyable=]

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