Top Secret Envleope

by yoITSme

A small girl with plain brown pigtail braids ran up to a tall girl with magnificent shiny hair.
“Here” She said breathlessley as she gave the taller girl an envelope with a professional looking stamp reading: TOP SECRET ; on it. The best part of this scene however was that a well hidden girl who was also quite short caught the whole ordeal on her iPhone. After touching the screen a few times, she sent the video to a girl named Jamie. In less than a minute, Jamie sent a short message back to the girl: D, GET THE ENVELOPE OR DIE ! It was short and sweet. Actually not that sweet. Jamie jumped out of the convienent hiding place.
“Hello girls.” She said sweetly. As she predicted shiney hair girl dropped the envelope in shock.
“OMG Dani…” Shiny girl started.
“I’ll be taking that, thank you very much.” Dani picked up the envelope and walked briskly to where Jamie was.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. Top Secret Envleope

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 7 months ago

    What’s in the mysterious envelope.. very spy..ish.
    LoA

  2. Top Secret Envleope

    White Hat's Buddy Icon White Hat

    Posted 7 months ago

    2.0 out of 5 stars

    A nice idea garbled by a poor use of language.

  3. Top Secret Envleope

    yoITSme's Buddy Icon yoITSme

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    what is that supposed to mean?!

  4. Top Secret Envleope

    heartbeats echocho's Buddy Icon heartbeats echocho

    Posted 7 months ago

    thats what i thought to! i have to agree though that this is very interesting…and spy..ish…
    LoA

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    leala1953's Buddy Icon leala1953

    Posted 6 months ago

    I’m a fan of agatha christie so, this could be a good one to read….you’ll never know..keep writing I added one I like the shiny hair girl. She should be a strong character to match her heights….down the road…

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