The Man Behind The Window

by Nouvelle Bardot

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There is a man living in the flat in the building across from mine. I can hear him singing at most every hour. He keeps his windows open, letting the music flutter out across the alley into mine. It hangs over me in an invisible aroma, and I breathe it in.

As I lean out my bathroom window, taking slow drags from my cigarette that i let dangle precariously from my fingers, I listen. He pounds away ever so lightly on his piano, spilling out enchanting and hypnotic delicacies for me to sample.

I’ve never seen him, just a shadow moving about restlessly in and out from the window’s frame. I wonder who he is, what his name is, or if he likes to smoke out of his window as well. I believe he is French, for he’s always spouting out his lyrics in the charismatic, soothing language with such diligence and proficiency.

I sometimes will sit in the tub, under a mountain of shimmery bubbles, watching the prisms they create, while I listen to that beautiful sound floating through my window.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Man Behind The Window

    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 7 months ago

    freakin awesome story.. such vivid imagery.. very exquisite picture painted by your artfully chosen words.

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    White Hat's Buddy Icon White Hat

    Posted 7 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    You got that out of the picture?
    1337.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 7 months ago

    Neat story, very evocative of languid afternoons in an urban setting, just lolling about, listening to the lives of the neighbors. Great feel to the whole thing.
    LoA

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    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, fantastic descriptions and imagery throughout the whole piece. Loved it; I was almost jealous that I wasn’t there to hear the music.

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    [pens&feathers]'s Buddy Icon [pens&feathers]

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Absolutely loved it.

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    Nouvelle Bardot's Buddy Icon Nouvelle Bardot

    Posted 7 months ago

    thank you

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    Ridcully Calvert's Buddy Icon Ridcully Calvert

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is very good. It reminds me of a song by an Afrikaans South African artist that has been covered by almost every other Afrikaans artist, called “Lisa’s piano”, and deals with the same issue – hearing music tinkling out and being entranced by it.

    I agree with the other commentators, the imagery is just beautiful

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