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Broken doll

by Blank

Had the head screamed as it fell into the furor of the ocean, its cries would have been lost to the rolling crashes of each wave. Isn’t that how she felt, standing on this precipice, weathering the coming storm not out of bravery, but out of exhaustion and guilt, this simple act meant to ward off the sleeplessness that had taken hold of her years ago.

The truth had not set her free that day.

She turned around to face him, only to catch the glaring reflections of the blades he wielded. His smile had cut her deep in the past, but now it was the knife in his hand that had her full attention.

Rain came down now, and everything became louder. He stabbed at her with words of hate and revenge, but much like the head’s cries, she would not hear them. The blades moved forward, this shadow of man growing ever larger. Lighting struck once, painful and fast.

Silence came immediately, and as she fell to her knees, soaked in rain and crimson blood, a faint smile lit up her face. Asleep at last, and forever.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Broken doll

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 10 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very dark and effectively dramatic jump from the inspiration picture. Excellent imagery and parallels between emotional and physical states. I was a little unsure, and I thought for a second the lightning killed the guy, but no, the lady is dead? Neat-o keen story either way.
    LoA

  2. Broken doll

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 10 months ago

    Wow! A very dark and thrilling sequel. I love the role of the storm and the metaphor of the head. I am glad you sequelled, and to be of inspiration!

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