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by invisibility_disability

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“WHAT?! NO!!!!” i ran into my room and slammed the door. i can’t believe we’re moving… this is so unfair.
“honey?... can we talk about this?” i heard my mom’s too-sweet voice say.
“no. leave me alone!” i flopped onto my bed and punched the pillow. how can they do this to me? i have friends here!! i like my school HERE ! i don’t want to move to some random city in the middle of nowhere, just because my dad has a job ‘promotion’ or whatever. ughh… i HATE this!

i felt a tapping on my shoulder. “giselle?” i faintly heard my dad say. i took out my earbuds and paused my iPod.
“what?”
“look, i know you didn’t want to move… i feel really bad that you had to leave all your friends and move almost all the way across the country, but… this is for the good of the family, okay? we’ll have more money… a bigger house… and you’ll make new friends. i know you will.”
“yeah… whatever.” i turned the heavy metal up to full volume and stared out the window, fuming at my parents.

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    A few [i’m not sure whether it’s spelling or grammar, so i’m going to say spellammar] errors in this, but otherwise i enjoyed it. it portrayed the feelings of Giselle very greatly.=]

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i just checked your profile and saw that this was your first ficlet, soooo..:
    WELCOME TO FICLETS !

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    heartbeats echocho's Buddy Icon heartbeats echocho

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    great start i must say. even though im a few ficlets late (i’ve read most of your other ficlets) let me be the second?to welcome you to ficlets! WELCOME TO FICLETS !
    lol glad to have you around…aboard?...along?...ehhh…whateva!glad to have ya…lol

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    heartbeats echocho's Buddy Icon heartbeats echocho

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    WELCOME TO FICLETS !! there now hopefully you can see it…
    no, im not crazy. just psyco. yesh, i am insane. lol
    LoA

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    lilfroggie1007's Buddy Icon lilfroggie1007

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Good job! Welcome to ficlets! Now I’m gonna go read the rest.

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