The young shaman

by Kimball Kinnison

This was his last chance, and so far he had taken three days and achieved nothing. “Just grow will you?” he whined, clenching his fists to dispell the ache which had begun to creep along his fingers. Sighing deeply, and stifling the bitter sound of defeat in his voice, he began to speak to the seed.

“Look, you simply have to grow. I know you could be great and beautiful, if only you would.” he complimented the silent tub of soil. “I can’t be sent home. My father would never let me return.”

He opened his hands once more and relaxed, closing his eyes. He felt for the currents flowing around him and began to gather them in. Calling, in his mind, on the power surrounding and permeating him. He began to push, seeing the tendrils of power reach out for the pot, yet they always slid past it. Some corner of his mind was aware of his teacher approaching, and in a final desperate panic he pushed harder than he had ever pushed before. The power surged from his fingertip and finally made contact with the pot.

“Wow!”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. The young shaman

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    lolol i love that he speaks to the seed, that made me laugh=]
    very fantasy-ic flair going on here, and i love it! it also added a lot to the story that you used descriptive words, awesome job!=]

  2. The young shaman

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    Nice job injecting very real feelings of fear and inadequacy into your fantastic setting.
    LoA

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