The Shortest Ever Love Story [Six Words Memoir Challenge]

by Ana Cristina

I loved.
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He lied.
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The end.
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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Shortest Ever Love Story [Six Words Memoir Challenge]

    butterflygirl6106's Buddy Icon butterflygirl6106

    Posted 7 months ago

    That was Good!!!!!!!!!

  2. The Shortest Ever Love Story [Six Words Memoir Challenge]

    Eckhouse's Buddy Icon Eckhouse

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice! I get the feeling “the end” could apply equally to either “He” or the story.

  3. The Shortest Ever Love Story [Six Words Memoir Challenge]

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ouch. Why are men so dumb? It seems to be a theme today and yesterday, which is funny in light of all the romantic stories I’ve also read in that time frame. For better or worse, eh?
    LoA

  4. The Shortest Ever Love Story [Six Words Memoir Challenge]

    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very good six word story, concise—but that goes without typing.

  5. The Shortest Ever Love Story [Six Words Memoir Challenge]

    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Could you edit this down a little, The descriptions are a bit heavy handed…Just messin.

  6. The Shortest Ever Love Story [Six Words Memoir Challenge]

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 6 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree with THX – men are dumb. Also, loved Tad’s second quote.

  7. The Shortest Ever Love Story [Six Words Memoir Challenge]

    Geheim Sir Ayita's Buddy Icon Geheim Sir Ayita

    Posted 6 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    a guy can make or break you….........nice way to put it!

  8. The Shortest Ever Love Story [Six Words Memoir Challenge]

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    beginng..middle..and end.. well done.
    LoA

  9. The Shortest Ever Love Story [Six Words Memoir Challenge]

    Trying to Blend's Buddy Icon Trying to Blend

    Posted 6 months ago

    Perfect.

  10. The Shortest Ever Love Story [Six Words Memoir Challenge]

    Thumper's Buddy Icon Thumper

    Posted 6 months ago

    Good job!

  11. The Shortest Ever Love Story [Six Words Memoir Challenge]

    Misheru O'ku's Buddy Icon Misheru O'ku

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    your six words really made an impact on me! Amen sister!

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