Discovery!

by invisibility_disability

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Kamaria could hear whispers all around her.
“Why is she so pale?,” “What up with the Goth look?,” “Did she kill somebody?,” etc. People passed her in the hallway and simply stared.
What the heck? What are they all staring at? she thought. Taking out her compact, she looked at her face. Oh my God, she thought. What the heck happened? She was… well, stunning. Kamaria couldn’t stop looking at herself. That was when she noticed them…

Her glistening, thirsty, fangs.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Discovery!

    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 8 months ago

    i know it’s really lame to comment on your own story, but just a note:
    “kamaria” means ‘darkness’ in japanese. ... and the japanese actually (mythologically, of course) discovered the vampire.

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    heartbeats echocho's Buddy Icon heartbeats echocho

    Posted 8 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    hahaha…thanks for the info, even if you commented on your own ficlet….lol oh! yes, great story. i don’t know but i think this could be an awesome series…
    LoA

  3. Discovery!

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 8 months ago

    thanks for the info…always nice to have a bit of depth, even in a fantasy story
    LoA

  4. Discovery!

    NightMaiden's Buddy Icon NightMaiden

    Posted 7 months ago

    YE-OWCH
    “Did she just kill somebody?” hahahah
    well….that’s what vampies look like

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