Hiding

by paper flowers

“Oh my God!” Kamaria rushed as quickly as she could to the nearest bathroom. Unfortunately for her, there were bunch of giggly girls huddled by the mirror. They stopped and glared at her. Embarrassed even more than before, she ran out.
Kamaria searched desperately for a place to hide. She found the janitor’s closet, snuck in, and closed the door.
Her heart was racing. At first she thought it was simply a dream, but she knew it wasn’t. She lifted her hand to her face. It was cold as ice.
Maybe I’m just sick she thought to herself. She felt the long fangs with her fingers. Fangs definitely weren’t a symptom of any illness she’d ever heard of.
Suddenly the silver handle of the door began to turn.
Crap!
The door creaked open…

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Hiding

    heartbeats echocho's Buddy Icon heartbeats echocho

    Posted 6 months ago

    ohhh! guys you have me in suspence! this is great P.Flower…
    LoA

  2. Hiding

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    I like the little logic train there about being sick but then disproving it with the fangs. Nice touch.
    LoA

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    lilfroggie1007's Buddy Icon lilfroggie1007

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ooooooooooooooh! I love it!

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