It Began as a Sound on the Wind

by [pens&feathers]

The old man awoke in the middle of the night. The rain had ceased and all was quiet. A gentle wind pushed against the sides of his flimsy shack.

He got up and went to the door, as though compelled by a will that was not his own. His feet shuffled over the worn boards and out into the night.

The old man lifted his face to the sky and the one bright star that shone through the last remaining bits of the storm. Tears shown in his eyes. He muttered something unintelligible, musical, a sound hardly discernable from the quiet, keening voice of the wind.

The wind carried it down the sheer face of the mountain. It swept into the valley, over the swollen river, and into the sleeping village.

It recognized the house; a small one, smoke curing from the chimney even at such a dark hour of morning. A window was open to the night. The wind flung the sound over the sill and into the house – the only house still awake at such an hour.

Destiny.

The sound reached Lucy’s ears, and she knew that it was time.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. It Began as a Sound on the Wind

    Nouvelle Bardot's Buddy Icon Nouvelle Bardot

    Posted 8 months ago

    WHOA . THAT WAS SPECTACULAR .

  2. It Began as a Sound on the Wind

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ooh, quite magical there. Nicely done. Really makes me wonder who both characters are and what the destiny is.
    LoA

  3. It Began as a Sound on the Wind

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 8 months ago

    I really can’t say more than what Nouvelle and THX have said – and what I’ve said in the past. Simply fantastic literature.

  4. It Began as a Sound on the Wind

    Christopher Sisk's Buddy Icon Christopher Sisk

    Posted 8 months ago

    Very mystical and alluring. The light descriptive tones compliment the overall mystique of the setting very well.

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