The Eyes

by Organics

The mask painted on her face was nowhere near as fascinating as the woman hidden behind it. Only her exposed eyed revealed the luminous soul inside. The intensity of those dark eyes was captivating. Was she inviting me in or just toying with me? I stared long and deep into them but couldn’t come up with any answers. I stood there, transfixed and undecided, secretly hoping she would make the choice for me.

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  1. The Eyes

    SJHundak/S.J.Willing's Buddy Icon SJHundak/S.J.Willing

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    would have liked to have seen a longer ficlet. It was very good otherwise

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