Haiku (I know it's a very unoriginal title but how the hell are you suppose to title a freakin' haiku?)

by Culture Shock w/ Mike Schwartz

That first brief “goodbye”
The one that started them all
Raindrops on your cheek

Comments

  1. Haiku (I know it's a very unoriginal title but how the hell are you suppose to title a freakin' haiku?)

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 5 months ago

    Hmm, ‘tis the season for brevity with six word challenges and some haikus floating around. Nice transition to a nature scene sort of break in the last line—very classical haiku of you.
    LoA

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