Sharing Music

by Culture Shock w/ Mike Schwartz

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The music was blasting across the alley way. An odd hypnotic beat that sent chills through my body as I thought of her swaying to the music. I had shared my music with her last night and now she was sharing hers.

My eyes were closed as I sprawled on the divan. Images of her based on that soft giggle and foreign accent, filled my mind

I suppose John must have thought I was trying to sleep or meditate when he came to do his services for the day. He immediately became livid that the loud ruckus was disturbing my rest.

I felt him rush past me to the window and start shouting at the girl to shut her “retched noise” off. I knew his French was falling upon deaf ears but the fact that he took such a tone with her enraged me.

I flung myself up and stumbled towards the window. Just as I caught John on the arm to pull him back, I heard her reply. “I’m sorry but I do not speak French. Does the music upset Pierre?” she sounded concerned.

Turning toward the voice, a smile spread across my face, “Not at all,” I called.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Sharing Music

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    Posted 5 months ago

    i think its kind of funny how your marguerite is very timid and innocent and mine is erotic and baudy.

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    Nouvelle Bardot's Buddy Icon Nouvelle Bardot

    Posted 5 months ago

    i love this sequel.but crap! she just admitted that she knows his name…awkward stalker moment perhaps?
    loa.

  3. Sharing Music

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    Posted 5 months ago

    I’m sorry I have no clue how to convey marguerite… she is a complete mystery to me… that’s why I try to avoid too much dialog from her :)

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    Posted 5 months ago

    its cool. gives me something to work with. its almost as if pierre himself has created this perfect,, personal image of her when in fact he cannot see what shes really like…
    loa.

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    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I think it works nicely, almost allegorical for the way we see ourselves versus how others perceive us. Pierre has a particular way he wants to see her, and that filters reality for him. How’s that for psychological and stuff! Really enjoying this series.
    LoA

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