Investigation: Interview [Part 1]

by artistsrunwild

I asked her to sit down on the hard wooden chair beside my desk. She co-operated, sitting down cautiously as if she were not allowed. She shuffled nervously, straightening her skirt and tucking the majority of it under her legs.

“Mrs James, I will be needing to ask you a few questions…about your husband,” I stated, writing down nothing of interest on my note pad. I was new at this and I was trying my hardest to look professional.

She looked up at me with tired eyes. She pulled an old packet of cigarettes out of her coat pocket and extracted one. She stuck it between her lips and lit the end of it with an antique lighter, displaying a skewed copy of the American flag. It was obviously old as the red had faded and the white of the stars was a murky gray.

“It was my mother’s,” Eleanor James said quietly, as if reading my mind. It made me uneasy, having her figure me out so easily. She smiled half-heartedly and tapped her smoke on the ashtray sitting on my desk. “I better answer your questions then.”

Comments

  1. Investigation: Interview [Part 1]

    artistsrunwild's Buddy Icon artistsrunwild

    Posted 6 months ago

    This has been sitting on my desk for a year. I’ve finally decided to publish it, BUT I have no idea where it’s headed.

    PLEASE anyone, jump in and sequel!

    Keep within the style set above as close as possible :)

  2. Investigation: Interview [Part 1]

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    Neat start with some strong character traits coming through on both characters. Nicely done.
    LoA

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