Bathtub Conversation

by Nouvelle Bardot

He looked confused. He kept his eyes off the window, I’m pretty sure the naked comment freaked him out.

“I just wanted to know,” he said, sounding sad.

“Call me whatever you want,” I said, waving my hand in the air, shooing away an invisible fly.

“You,” he said, “Are the angel in my window.”

“That’s embarrassing,” I said, trying to suppress laughter. I could tell he looked hurt at my comment.

“Oh fine, fine,” I grumbled. “My name is Marguerite.”

“Marguerite,” he sighed, putting a hand to his heart, “So beautiful.” Oh god, he’s the mushy type. I’m screwed.

“Um, yeah…okay,” I said curiously.

“Marguerite!” he cried, “I wrote you a song. I shall play it for you while you bathe.” He dissapeared into his flat. I should have kept the window closed.

“What happened to talking?” I shouted. This man has terrible conversation skills. I reached over to the stereo sitting on a stool by the tub and pushed play.

Ah, David Bowie, I thought as I sunk into the sparkling bubbles.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Bathtub Conversation

    Nouvelle Bardot's Buddy Icon Nouvelle Bardot

    Posted 5 months ago

    somehow, in every series, i have to mention david bowie. impulse perhaps?

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    Culture Shock w/ Mike Schwartz's Buddy Icon Culture Shock w/ Mike Schwartz

    Posted 5 months ago

    hmm… that’s all I can say…

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 5 months ago

    This girl is getting very, very fickle, not that Pierre is a total gem. Nice job by you both of creating flawed but likable characters.
    LoA

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    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Must agree with THX , she’s a bit fickle. Also, it strikes me as odd that all of a sudden Pierre is this mushy Romeo type. Still, I heart the series.

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