Fallen

by Culture Shock w/ Mike Schwartz

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Taken off guard, I jumped backwards. Unfortunately not being able to see, I was unable to catch myself, and felt my body crash to the wooden floor.

Sheer embarrassment replaced any emotion I had before. Now she would know my greatest flaw. That I would never be able to look into her beautiful eyes. I would never be able to see her smile.

Time dragged as I laid there. The thought of what expression she might have, terrified me. I tried to pick myself up, but it was to no avail. I did not know what to grip onto.

“Could you give me a hand?” I finally requested while holding mine out blindly in front of me.

Still silence, as she caught my hand and helped me to my feet. “There is something I should tell you…” I began as I tried to find my way to my bench.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh, I feel so bad for Pierre… I wonder how she will react! I swear I feel like I know these characters, you’ve made them that real.
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    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 5 months ago

    SEEEEEEEEEEQQQQQQQQUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLL ! Ack! Please!

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 5 months ago

    Tenderly told, really make us feel for the poor guy, there on the floor embarrassed but not able to see any reassuring signs that might mitigate that feeling.
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