Give it Back!

by .:band baby:.

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Once again, I set down my pen and re-read my story. Wishful thinking was all it was. I knew it would never happen, but I could dream.

“Pennie? Whatcha writing ‘bout?” Levi asked taking my notebook and trying to read my story.

“Levi! Give that back. It’s private! Levi, Come on.” I yelled, jumping up and reaching for my book. He turned just out of my grasp and continued reading. I felt my face flush completly as it became apparent he wasn’t giving it back without finishing first.

Slowly, he looked up at me and handed me back my notebook. I blushed deeper and took it back, mumbling my thanks as I fumbled to put my notebook in my backpack. Any other story. I thought. Any other one woudn’t have mattered, but no. He just had to read the one about him.

Not knowing exactly what to do, I mumbled an excuse, turned and started walking away.
I hadn’t gone more then two steps when Levi grabbed my arm and spun me around. Wrapping his arms around me he kissed me.

“I like you too.” He whispered after.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Give it Back!

    wytherwings' Buddy Icon wytherwings

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    awww i like it. awesome

  2. Give it Back!

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 7 months ago

    Oh, that was cute, and kind of a layered example of wishful thinking within wishful thinking, perhaps? I think most authors would like to affect someone with what they write, and this would be one heck of a way to affect someone. Lovely, adorable story, and a great job on the challenge!
    LoA

  3. Give it Back!

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 7 months ago

    nice day dream!

  4. Give it Back!

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 7 months ago

    wow thats way cute. WAY CUTE . now if only i didnt have severe writers block.. i would have totally sequeled.

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