As for the memories

by heartbeats echocho

Can’t get enough of a bad thing, huh?
That’s just like you.
Tell me only what you think I want to hear,
so that I’m happy.
Well, I’m not…
You think I’m pretending?
I can only watch as you become
something you’re not.
Why can’t * I * stop you?
I don’t know you anymore,
you’re such a fake.
I want another chance,
but you keep pushing me away.
I just want to see your smile,
but even that has changed.....

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. As for the memories

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Lovely poem with the embedded second meaning, which I almost missed cause that one bolding didn’t work for some reason. Very creative use of that, by the way.
    LoA

  2. As for the memories

    heartbeats echocho's Buddy Icon heartbeats echocho

    Posted 5 months ago

    yeah i know that one ‘I’ is messed up!
    i had to edit it cause if i wanted it bold, the whole line would be bold…which messed up the hidden sentences. lol whateva though…
    LoA

  3. As for the memories

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 2 months ago

    Awwww… I swear I didn’t copy you or any thing!!! Great minds just think alike!!! {Only I was 2 months late…lol}

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