Who Am I ?

by Brandiee;*<3

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Who Am I?

Day by day,
Night by night,
I walk through the woods searching for light.
I wonder if I will ever have a dream…..
Every night I think I hear a scream.
The radiance of the sun is beautiful to me,
But nothing is ever as it should be.
The world is ok, I guess its fine,
But the question is who am I?

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Who Am I ?

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 8 months ago

    I liked this quite a bit. I sequeled, just to let you know. Not like it’s worth reading.
    LoA

  2. Who Am I ?

    mmmarmalade's Buddy Icon mmmarmalade

    Posted 8 months ago

    I ask myself that rather a lot. I love the dichotomous nature of this. Beautifully done.

  3. Who Am I ?

    Brandiee;*<3's Buddy Icon Brandiee;*<3

    Posted 8 months ago

    thanks for the comments guys. i wrote this in third grade so its not really good.

  4. Who Am I ?

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 8 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    In the third grade? That kicks major butt for third grade. Heck, it’s better than my poems in junior high that got me sent to the guidance counselor. Thanks for sharing.
    LoA

  5. Who Am I ?

    Brandiee;*<3's Buddy Icon Brandiee;*<3

    Posted 7 months ago

    lol i guess. thanks (:

  6. Who Am I ?

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 7 months ago

    lol… it is really good…

  7. Who Am I ?

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow. ‘Tis awesome.

  8. Who Am I ?

    Brandiee;*<3's Buddy Icon Brandiee;*<3

    Posted 7 months ago

    thankss

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