Starting Over Fresh

by Nouvelle Bardot

“Pierre…I…erm…” I stammered, trying to conjure up all the honesty I could, “No, I don’t love you.”

“Oh,” he said, almost if the words had punched him.

“But,” I said, touching his shoulder, “That could change.” He lifted his face towards mine, and his lips parted as if from an immediate shock.

“Marguerite…” He said, reaching out to find my face, which he felt, up and down gently with his fingers, as if he were trying to see my face through them, “I love you.”

“Are you sure?” I said, a little taken aback, “We haven’t even had a real conversation, you don’t know anything about me, and I have no idea who you really are…”

“That could change,” he said with a smile. I couldn’t help but let out a small laugh in response.

“Pierre,” I said, “right now, lets forget all about love, and everything and start over fresh.”

“Alright,” he said, “starting fresh.” He pulled me into a kiss. We were shortly interrupted, when we heard the flat door open and close.

“Its John,” Pierre said grumpily.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Starting Over Fresh

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 7 months ago

    awww, perfect close to the drama of learning about Pierre. Now on to John’s reaction….

  2. Starting Over Fresh

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 7 months ago

    Ah, okay, Pierre’s not desperate, just a romantic at heart, and with some smooth moves even. But, how will John react? He could go a lot of ways, and I’m curious to see where the two of you will take him.
    LoA

  3. Starting Over Fresh

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 7 months ago

    Ha ha. John seems to interrupt everything. I’m glad that Marguerite was honest with Pierre. Better than stringing him along.
    SEQUEL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  4. Starting Over Fresh

    Lena Red's Buddy Icon Lena Red

    Posted 7 months ago

    Love…. “That could change”. Seductive.
    Also like that there is “religious kitch” in the other story….
    (sorry about my spelling. If I were a supper hero spelling would be my kryptonite. Or is that cyrptonite? hmmmmmmm).

  5. Starting Over Fresh

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    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I am finally back and have finally sequeled… I can’t believe how far this story has gone… it’s incredible!

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