All Over A Boy!

by Twitch

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What a stupid idea it was to say yes.
I didn’t know what I was getting myself into.
But hey… he was cute… and funny!
We went out for 5 whole months.
Then the words came.
“It’s not you… it’s me.”
Oh like we all haven’t heard that one before!
My life was at it’s worst end.
I cryed myself to sleep.
Then the worst of the worst happened,
He started going out with her.
My best friend!
How could she?
How dare she!
But then…after 5 more months,
it happened to her:
“It’s not you… It’s me.”
They were over,
so was she,
How much more happy could I be?
Right?
No…
How could I?
How dare I!
I lost a friendship, a good one,
Over a boy.
I said to her “Could we forget this? You know, leave it behind?”
“Well I’ve missed you… and I wouldn’t mind if it was back to the way it was again, so, yeah!”
She replied.
“I’m sorry!” I cried,
“Me too!”, and with a hug it was behind us…

Just think, this started…
All over a boy.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. All Over A Boy!

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is a true story

  2. All Over A Boy!

    yoITSme's Buddy Icon yoITSme

    Posted 7 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    hmm…a few mispelled words, a few grammatical mistakes. good idea

  3. All Over A Boy!

    Living In Wonder Land ♠'s Buddy Icon Living In Wonder Land ♠

    Posted 7 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    cute,one star though????
    3 stars :]

  4. All Over A Boy!

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 7 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I thought it was quite nice, almost like a little poem. And the parallel with the repeat of How could… and How dare… was a nice touch. Not sure why yoITSme only gave one star. Go figure.
    LoA

  5. All Over A Boy!

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Thnx guys… I edited it is it better now?

  6. All Over A Boy!

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    MY GOD ! ONE STAR ????
    I luv it! It’s beautiful!

  7. All Over A Boy!

    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 7 months ago

    This is awesome!! One star?? That’s odd

  8. All Over A Boy!

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    lol… thnx guys…

  9. All Over A Boy!

    Fantasy's Buddy Icon Fantasy

    Posted 7 months ago

    wow…i really like it. it has a great poetic feel, with a great story behind it.

  10. All Over A Boy!

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    thank you that was what i was going for…

  11. All Over A Boy!

    BECCA{pretty much AMAZING}'s Buddy Icon BECCA{pretty much AMAZING}

    Posted 7 months ago

    GOOD JOB !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  12. All Over A Boy!

    Question Queen of the 21st centuary.'s Buddy Icon Question Queen of the 21st centuary.

    Posted 7 months ago

    Good job court! i ♥ IT!

  13. All Over A Boy!

    Question Queen of the 21st centuary.'s Buddy Icon Question Queen of the 21st centuary.

    Posted 7 months ago

    Is it about Tony??

  14. All Over A Boy!

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    yeah… it is!! me and hailey are the two girls…

  15. All Over A Boy!

    Brandiee;*<3's Buddy Icon Brandiee;*<3

    Posted 7 months ago

    ahaha im dumb. i was gunna ask that. oh wow. good job tho Court.

  16. All Over A Boy!

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    thnx!!

  17. All Over A Boy!

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    courtney i really do like this. and im so sorry for all of that! just like you said… all of this.. over a boy…

  18. All Over A Boy!

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    and him…. thats just… well you get it. lol

  19. All Over A Boy!

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    lol…. i know what ur saying…. iit’s okay… we were both making it worse by ignoring eachothers side of the stories…. then when we did listen… we never believed eachother… or we just lied to stop the drama… but now… we’re older and more mature…. so we can handle a fite… hopefully!! lol

  20. All Over A Boy!

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i agree. last year we just yelled acusations blankly at eachother without knowing the whole story. and we let our friends take our sides without them knowing the whole story.

  21. All Over A Boy!

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    lol… i know… i felt so alone!!!

  22. All Over A Boy!

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    yah…. sorry again.

  23. All Over A Boy!

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    seriously… its ok… we’re good now… and we don’t really have anything to fite about… oh god i hope tony doesn’t come back… i still like him! [I know… I’m pathetic!] lol….

  24. All Over A Boy!

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    :/ lol…

  25. All Over A Boy!

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    well if he comes back sorry but…. well you get it. lol

  26. All Over A Boy!

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wait …. i dont get it…. wha? note it to me…. lol

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