Keep Going Even Though You're Lost

by zkid

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You eventually stumble across a small stream, filled with brightly coloured fish. Thirsty from wandering the jungle for hours you plunge in and take a long drink.

You feel tingly for a few seconds, but the feeling passes, before being replaced by a curious feeling of weightlessness.

Zoe screams!

As you turn to her to ask what is wrong, thinking she must have seen the pirates following you, your scales flash in the sunlight.

Yes, scales. Unbeknownst to you, the stream was cursed long ago by a witch living on the island. You have become one of the brightly coloured fish.

Zoe and Joe go on without you. You never see them again.

The End

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Keep Going Even Though You're Lost

    zkid's Buddy Icon zkid

    Posted 6 months ago

    You died! Well, you reached the end.

    If you want to, you can start your journey again from the beginning here:

    http://ficlets.com/stories/21280

  2. Keep Going Even Though You're Lost

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    Great end…just like in the books, random and bizarre.
    LoA

  3. Keep Going Even Though You're Lost

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow! THX is right…

  4. Keep Going Even Though You're Lost

    Russell Ruffino's Buddy Icon Russell Ruffino

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nicely done, didn’t see that coming.

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