Moving

by skylar

“Why are we moving again? i moaned under my breath. The house was in a disoray. All i saw was a sea of brown boxes. All of out memories packed inside of them. “Margie where are your boxes.? my mom asked in a faroff place.
“Margie what are you doing? asked my mom in an exasperated voice. I snapped back to reality” um ..just thinking ” i said hurriedly.Get these boxes downstairs now!” my mom snapped and closed my door.

I sighed another summer in another place,
figures i thought.
"Margie "
i heard my mom call.
"I'm coming" i yelled. I picked up my boxes
that held all of my memories and ran downstairs.

I saw the moving van parked outside. I felt tears in my eyes but i pushed them back , I have moved fifteen times. No more crying. I walked out to the van out ogf that house forever.

Comments

  1. Moving

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 7 months ago

    Nice emotion and mood throughout. (What makes that typewritery-looking font? I can’t for the life of me figure out what it is, and I see it more and more on ficlets.) Anyway, good job, besides nit-picky spelling and stuff. That’s just me, though.

  2. Moving

    skylar's Buddy Icon skylar

    Posted 7 months ago

    The type writer font just starts happening after i start writing i dont know what it is

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