My most memorable valentine night

by Lena Red

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Red light falling on wet streets
Red light on my lips, now breasts, now hands, now feet
I stand in the red light
Red light rhythm, pool of water catches eves trough drops

White heat moving up my spine
White heat in my gut
I open my mouth and breathe out white heat
White heat makes fuzzy noises in my mind

Blue music spilling out of open club doors like winos spill
Blue music electrifies the night
I feel blue music swell my loins
Blue music is my lover tonight

Gray Avenue leads back to the bench
Gray Avenue where lovers flow to cross streets
I wonder will they’ll take to the streets of passion or of pain
Gray Avenue, I spill along back to the bench where my clothes lay still soaked

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. My most memorable valentine night

    butterflygirl6106's Buddy Icon butterflygirl6106

    Posted 7 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Great flow of odd synchronies, i really like it.

  2. My most memorable valentine night

    passionate4pens' Buddy Icon passionate4pens

    Posted 7 months ago

    what? i didn’t get it

  3. My most memorable valentine night

    Lena Red's Buddy Icon Lena Red

    Posted 7 months ago

    There really isn’t anything to get. Just a mish mash of momments that strung together a lonely night.

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