Starhook

by l.m.orchard

One hundred vapor trails and more struck upward that day, all around the world, all away from the world. Most took advantage of the nightside, streaking straight out into the void. Others less fortunate swung out on circuitous orbits from daylight.

Each was a precious speeding mote, bearing small crews or lone pilots, most stocked with great stores of supplies for an extended journey. Their projected vectors would all meet at a point just a few light-minutes away from home, though none of them sped quite as fast as light itself.

After hours, a handful of vessels met the inbound-travelling frontier of tortured spacetime. It had been made elastic, cast out across the universe. Only one craft breached the safe threshold before the tentacle passed zenith and whiplashed back the way it came, ferrying only that one along with it.

Those closest were torn apart by the wake of the retreating phenomenon. Others who’d been too slow by far were merely strewn about and stranded, left to ponder the lucky winner’s fate.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 5 months ago

    Great big idea told beautifully with a bitter sweet ending. Amazing sci-fi stuff. Definitely worthy of a sequel, if my brain was working that well this AM.
    LoA

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    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 4 months ago

    Your sci-fi is like none other. Incredible description with great detail. I don’t care if you even have no idea what you’re talking about (which I’m sure you do), because it sure sounds fantastic to me. =)

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    l.m.orchard's Buddy Icon l.m.orchard

    Posted 4 months ago

    Sheesh, thanks for the compliments! :) I need to do more of this stuff and actually build up some longer stories

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    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 4 months ago

    One of the more amazing sci-fi stories on ficlets.
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    Posted 4 months ago

    I completly agree with everything above. =) Very good job.
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