Poem #1

by Disturbed Youth

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No one can see
No one can hear
The pain you feel
The trouble, near

No one can touch
No one can say
The numbness inside
You feel each day

No one can ponder
No one understands
The hurt that haunts you
Your life is in their hands

Pain so real
It’s hard to deal
Heart so cold
The soul is clasped in iron hold

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Poem #1

    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow this is so sad and cold, but so wonderfully written

  2. Poem #1

    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted 7 months ago

    i completely agree with phosphate11 on this one
    nice job!
    LoA

  3. Poem #1

    Etsuko Sohma's Buddy Icon Etsuko Sohma

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    this is really good.
    u can grow up to be a great poet or writer someday!

  4. Poem #1

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i totally agree, this is really good!!!!
    great job=]

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