Poem #3

by Disturbed Youth

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Broken Heart—

Ripped at the seams
Drowning in pain
Cold Inside
Blood and tears seem to rain
Heart ripped out
Having your heart broken,
again

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Poem #3

    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    yes a broken heart is so sad!! It has to be one of the worst things in the world.

  2. Poem #3

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i love how you put that little addent on there, “again”. idk why, but it really made this flow, if that makes sense.=]

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