Discovery

by emma jo_234

Lissy had lost interest in the chest.

The little girl tottered around, trying hopelessly to scale the thick oak. Anna and Erin ignored her.

Erin fiddled with the latch of the metal chest and finally pried it open. When she lifted the lid, it creaked like a door in a haunted house.

“What’s there?” Anna whispered.

Erin didn’t reply. She gingerly lifted several items out of the deep chest: a doll, a yellowed, thick envelope, and a crisp, white sheet of paper, folded over.

The girls stared. A few feet away, Lissy had given up on the tree and now sat, happily sucking on a blade of grass.

Anna gently picked up the doll. It was immensely fragile, liable to break any moment. Its china arms were ghost-white and it had deep blue eyes.

“Let’s look in the envelope,” Erin said in a hushed tone. “What d’you think?”

Anna had no idea what to think. All thoughts of the Internet and city had just left her mind, because this afternoon had just become quite interesting indeed.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice job immersing the character and us in an old time mystery, pulling us away from our fast-paced, digital lives.
    LoA

  2. Discovery

    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 7 months ago

    Called it! This is a great sequel! So keep going! What does the note say??

  3. Discovery

    Fantasy's Buddy Icon Fantasy

    Posted 7 months ago

    oooo!!! i wanna find out more!!

  4. Discovery

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    adventure. i like how the other girl is disinterested.
    LoA

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