FORGET ♥ I hate you.

by Leave Me A Note

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Never forget the words I say
Never forget me anyway
Never forget the times we’ve had
Never forget the death of your dad
Never forget what you used to be
Never forget you and me
Never forget the times spent alone
Never forget the “twilight zone”
Never forget “listen” and “speak”
Never forget the days that were bleak
Never forget the artist and the art
Never forget the crap we did with the grocery cart
Never forget the butterflies and the birds
Never forget those half-hearted words
Never forget the songs that were sung
Never forget the time they were hung
Never forget the graveyard and the casket
Never forget the rosemary basket
Never forget the other day
Never forget the year 1966 in May
Never forget the most deadliest sin
Never forget the what we could have been
Never forget you and me
Never forget what we used to be
I hate you with passion and with ♥.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. FORGET ♥ I hate you.

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 7 months ago

    Nice! This is really really good! I love the last line, brought the whole thing together!

  2. FORGET ♥ I hate you.

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 7 months ago

    Very nice. I can tell this is a healing thing for you. I enjoyed the rhyme and near-perfect rhythm.
    LoA

  3. FORGET ♥ I hate you.

    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, this is really nice. Good job! I love how well it flows!

  4. FORGET ♥ I hate you.

    heartbeats echocho's Buddy Icon heartbeats echocho

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow. awesome repition. i loved the feel and the passion mixed in it…
    LoA

  5. FORGET ♥ I hate you.

    Living In Wonder Land ♠'s Buddy Icon Living In Wonder Land ♠

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is really good. The rhythm is perfect and the vibe it gives you as you read from line to line
    5stars

  6. FORGET ♥ I hate you.

    LovingYourHeartbreak♥'s Buddy Icon LovingYourHeartbreak♥

    Posted 4 months ago

    I LOVE IT .
    It conveys so much feeling.
    awesome repitition.
    You are a great writer.
    5 stars all the way.
    :]

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