A Very Good Night

by Bag of Sand

“Are you going to finish those.”

“Help yourself.”

“So.”

“So what.”

“So what do you think of me now that we’ve met in person?”

“So, what do I think of you?”

“What do you think of me?”

“Uh – I don’t know how to…where do you start?”

“What do you like about me?”

“I like your voice, that’s first. I like the way it gives attention to even mundane things. There’s something relaxing about it, but it’s weighty, important. It’s like…it’s like melted chocolate with authority. It’s the first thing I noticed.”

“The first thing?”

“I’d be a liar if I said I wasn’t turned on by you. I like your sense of style, you’re hair. You’re body. I like the way you smell. You know, I haven’t had the opportunity to touch or to…to taste you yet, but I think I can safely say I enjoy all of your sensory outputs.

“Do you have plans to touch or taste me anytime soon?”

“Well, the saying goes God laughs when man makes plans.

But if I were to touch or taste you, it would be a very good night.”

Comments

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  1. A Very Good Night

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    Posted 7 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Ooh la la! But I can’t tell if a guy or girl is talkng.. Still nice job though.
    LoA

  2. A Very Good Night

    Melia's Buddy Icon Melia

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ditto the Ohh la la :) That was hot. I don’t think it matters that you can’t tell the genders of the speakers. Makes it interesting if you ascribe your own. Could be a guy and a girl who’ve met for coffee after they’d chatted online for a while. That’s what I imagined. And I liked it :)

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