I hold my breath as she walks past...

by Angela Smith

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As she walks by…
I hold my breath
Wondering…
Hoping…
That she will notice me today.
There is only one problem…
I am a girl, so is she…
So what will she think of me?
Will she hate me or will she not…
Or will she think I’m hot?

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. I hold my breath as she walks past...

    Angela Smith's Buddy Icon Angela Smith

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I am bi… I will admit it… but don’t judge a book by it’s cover!!

  2. I hold my breath as she walks past...

    vampierella's Buddy Icon vampierella

    Posted 6 months ago

    Nice one. I like it.
    Greetz

  3. I hold my breath as she walks past...

    Angela Smith's Buddy Icon Angela Smith

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    thank you!!

  4. I hold my breath as she walks past...

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    That’s a cute poem and a nice example of the double-doubt associated with same sex attraction. You have to wonder if A) the other person is okay with same sex stuff, and then B) they happen to like you. I definitely feel for people in that situation. Thanks for sharing.
    LoA

  5. I hold my breath as she walks past...

    Angela Smith's Buddy Icon Angela Smith

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ok I am going to write a sequel!!

  6. I hold my breath as she walks past...

    Angela Smith's Buddy Icon Angela Smith

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I will have to take a couple days though because I have to think it through…. and once I finally get it… I keep changing it until I am satisfied!

  7. I hold my breath as she walks past...

    Angela Smith's Buddy Icon Angela Smith

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    so… I about a week you might see it!

  8. I hold my breath as she walks past...

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 6 months ago

    i like it, its really good.

  9. I hold my breath as she walks past...

    Question Queen of the 21st centuary.'s Buddy Icon Question Queen of the 21st centuary.

    Posted 6 months ago

    It is really good! hailey do u relate? and i don’t mean tht in a bad way?

  10. I hold my breath as she walks past...

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 6 months ago

    i did. not so much anymore. just because i dont like anybody right now.

  11. I hold my breath as she walks past...

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 6 months ago

    sequel soon!

  12. I hold my breath as she walks past...

    HeartlessAngel4LYFE's Buddy Icon HeartlessAngel4LYFE

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    hey!!! i like that…hey!!! just be brave..

  13. I hold my breath as she walks past...

    Angela Smith's Buddy Icon Angela Smith

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i’m sequeling it soon…

  14. I hold my breath as she walks past...

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 6 months ago

    good. i cant wait. lol

  15. I hold my breath as she walks past...

    Qwerty123's Buddy Icon Qwerty123

    Posted 6 months ago

    wow that was great and I think your good writer.

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