The fire in the apartment complex...

by Twitch

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I hear the barking, but I don’t want to wake up, I also hear a roaring sound. I open my eyes and I look around me and I tremble in fear as I see an orange glowing light outside my room and smoke pouring into my room. The roaring of the fire is deafening. I look out my three-story window and see the fire trucks trying to calm the burning flames. My heart is racing, what do I do now?

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. The fire in the apartment complex...

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I am putting the sequel on now…

  2. The fire in the apartment complex...

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I am putting the sequel on now…

  3. The fire in the apartment complex...

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    sry about double posting… don’t know why that happened!

  4. The fire in the apartment complex...

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very exciting, and the perfect sort of story to use the present tense for (missed one though, that first verb is past tense). The first two sentences are kind of run-on, and it might work better to break them up a bit, just to throw some constructive stuff out there.
    LoA

  5. The fire in the apartment complex...

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ok… thanks!!

  6. The fire in the apartment complex...

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I fixed the past tense into pre-tense… same with the sequel!!

  7. The fire in the apartment complex...

    Qwerty123's Buddy Icon Qwerty123

    Posted 6 months ago

    Wow this is a great story and Its very exciting☻

  8. The fire in the apartment complex...

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    thnk you ally!

  9. The fire in the apartment complex...

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    thnk you ally!

  10. The fire in the apartment complex...

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    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    hey!!! Read the Sequels!!!!

  11. The fire in the apartment complex...

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    and comment on them please!!!! tee-hee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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