The fire in the apartment complex... 2

by Twitch

I look down and I see that my dog hasn’t left yet… wait thats odd, she has a doggie door so she can get out into the hallway but she hasn’t left. I didn’t really think of why. I go see if the door leading out into the apartment building hallway was ingulped in flames like everything else. It wasn’t. I slowly open the door and see that the fire is down the other hall where the Johnsons lived. I hope they are okay. I pick up my little doggie who was still barking at me for some apparent reason and run out into the hall, as soon as I zoom out the door, the ceiling to my aprtment collapses! My only obejection now is to get out of here alive.

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  1. The fire in the apartment complex... 2

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 7 months ago

    Ooh, you slipped into past tense there. Still very exciting.

  2. The fire in the apartment complex... 2

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 7 months ago

    ok… I will fix that!!!

  3. The fire in the apartment complex... 2

    Question Queen of the 21st centuary.'s Buddy Icon Question Queen of the 21st centuary.

    Posted 7 months ago

    Thats good court keep adding on!

  4. The fire in the apartment complex... 2

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 7 months ago

    I fixed the past tense things!!

  5. The fire in the apartment complex... 2

    Qwerty123's Buddy Icon Qwerty123

    Posted 7 months ago

    Wow I think its you should keep adding this story is great☻

  6. The fire in the apartment complex... 2

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 7 months ago

    I will I have it all written down I just need to find the time to post it!

  7. The fire in the apartment complex... 2

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 7 months ago

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