Mystery Writing

by emma jo_234

Anna was the eldest of the three, and therefore believed herself to be queen. Naturally.

Anna glared meaningfully at Erin. “You take her back,” she hissed.

Erin shook her head subtly. “No! You!”

“I’m hungry!” wailed Lissy beside them, tears poring down her chubby little face.

“Take her back to Grandma!” Anna yelled over Lissy’s moans, which were crescendoing at an alarming rate.

No!”

“Do it!”

They continued like this for a while. In the end, Erin gave in, as they all could have guessed she would. Erin, being the cousin rather than the sister, felt more sympathy for the little girl.

When Erin scooped the howling girl up in her arms, made a face over her shoulder, and departed, Anna turned back to the photographs.

She turned over the one showing a family portrait. On the back, some dates were scribbled under a few setences. The handwriting was impossible for Anna to decipher. Erin would be able to, but Erin was long gone.

Now all Anna could do was wait for her return.

Comments

  1. Mystery Writing

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 5 months ago

    Very sweet. ejoyable.
    LoA

  2. Mystery Writing

    Cat the Dancing Mouse's Buddy Icon Cat the Dancing Mouse

    Posted 5 months ago

    Hi emma! I missed you!

    Wonderful..the anticipation is growing. I love how you took the picture of a farm and transformed it into a twisting maze of mystery.
    Five Stars, Keep writing!
    —CTDM (note me :))

  3. Mystery Writing

    Fantasy's Buddy Icon Fantasy

    Posted 5 months ago

    this is a really good series. It has a lot of potential. You could really turn it into a great adventure/mystery if you wanted.

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